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The True Embrace Of Spring by ~Vampychicken:iconVampychicken:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


Before I never saw the sky as blue
Until you appeared and erased my pain
For a time, I was afraid to say it
My heart was worried and weak
Unsure what to say if you were to hate the real me
I wished for someone like you
To accept me
And you always stayed with me
You were always happy when something good happened
Never forgot me when everyone else would
You were the only one
Who would cry for me, care for me
I never knew this feeling would find me
Next to you, here, right now
The touch of your hand on my cheek and your kind smile
This is the true embrace of spring
©2005-2009 ~Vampychicken
:iconvampychicken:

Author's Comments

I'm sure exactly where to put fan poems or anything, or even if that's possible. But anyway, this is a poem I wrote for Yuki from Fruits Basket about his feelings for Tohru.

It was really strange to write this. I was playing on Tibia at the time I was writing this and while I was trying to understand the feelings Yuki has for Tohru, I started acting like HIM. I was talking to a friend at the time and suddenly I started saying things that Yuki would say. o.O It really was weird because for a while, I didn't feel like me, but like Yuki. I eventually calmed down and went back to normal, but, MAN was that weird. o.O My friend was really confused at the things I was saying. . .

Well, it's not that great, but oh well.

Fruits Basket is copyright Natsuki Takaya-sensei

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~Tasariel Aug 28, 2005, 5:37:48 AM
You were CHANNELING Yuki!? @_@
I think you were! this is really good! and it seems to me that it captures the feelings he has for her! :glomp: And as always, your words paint a wonderfully vivid picture.

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I want to lay beneath the light of the moon and let the snow fall all around me; listening to the earth sleep.
:iconvampychicken:
~Vampychicken Aug 28, 2005, 5:17:18 PM
lol, Thank you very much! =^-^=

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Poodles beware: I have blasters and I'm looking for you.
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It's not an obsession, I just happen to have hundreds of dollars worth of manga. Ooh, special edition? :drool: M1N3!!!!! :reading:
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~LarienElensar Aug 28, 2005, 6:55:29 PM
This is really good, but im not thrilled at the thought of Yuki with Tohru... I'm all for Kyo!!! Btw i just bought a Kyo shirt!! lol That's so wierd how u can suddenly become someone else especially if it's an anime character. For some time, I kept making gestures like the ppl in FFX without even knowing it until my brother pointed it out... x_x

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It's like water but with deadly nitrogen.
:iconvampychicken:
~Vampychicken Aug 28, 2005, 7:15:22 PM
Lol, I want Kyo and Tohru together too, but I have a big feeling Yuki will be the one. =( Poor Kyo.

:jawdrop: You got a Kyo shirt? Where?

lol, Yeah, it's weird to act like them. I do it every now and then without meaning too. o.O Lol, yay, I'm not the only one! XD :boogie:

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Poodles beware: I have blasters and I'm looking for you.
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It's not an obsession, I just happen to have hundreds of dollars worth of manga. Ooh, special edition? :drool: M1N3!!!!! :reading:
:iconlarienelensar:
~LarienElensar Aug 29, 2005, 1:24:05 PM
i know... but it's so sad!! Yuki is soooo needy. *sweatdrop* Well, most ppl can tell im not a big fan of his... But if Tohru doesn't want Kyo, i'll take him! x_x

I got the shirt at Hot Topic.... but it is so expensive... I spent most of my money... I need to get a job. *sigh*

Yea, you're not the only one! There r others like us!! >.<

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It's like water but with deadly nitrogen.
:iconvampychicken:
~Vampychicken Aug 29, 2005, 3:20:56 PM
lol! Yeah, I don't really see the big deal about Yuki either. I mean, he's okay, but Kyo is much better. XD However, I do love rodents. . .:plotting: Heheheh, jk.

I know what you mean; I need a job to support my manga addiction. =(

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Poodles beware: I have blasters and I'm looking for you.
---
It's not an obsession, I just happen to have hundreds of dollars worth of manga. Ooh, special edition? :drool: M1N3!!!!! :reading:
:iconlarienelensar:
~LarienElensar Sep 1, 2005, 8:40:46 AM
lol ugh i thought u were serious 4 a sec... rodents.... O_O im trying 2 keep from buying new series... >.< i cant help myself...

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It's like water but with deadly nitrogen.
:iconvampychicken:
~Vampychicken Sep 2, 2005, 2:58:22 PM
lol! I know what you mean. :D

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Poodles beware: I have blasters and I'm looking for you.
---
It's not an obsession, I just happen to have hundreds of dollars worth of manga. Ooh, special edition? :drool: M1N3!!!!! :reading:
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