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I need to wake up before I realize I'm dreaming
Or disappoinments will be the last thing on my mind
It's one thing to go through life pretending you're alright
Then go through it on clouds composed of silly schemes

Happy endings don't happen everyday
Try to make it but it don't work out that way
So I hide inside my mind to free me from confining times
Behind the fine line of reality or life

Open my eyes, I have to realize what I've done
Living my life inside a world I'm imagining
Feet first, must look to leap
Step back, can't touch the ground
Look up, look down, just spinning 'round
Make sure sky is down and ground is up
My mind can't take anymore abuse
Is it reality? I thought my brain was just loose

This is my life, I'm completely alone
Lost in the real world and a world all of my own
My one mistake was letting the other world take over me
My second one was letting the real world walk over me
So where am I, dreaming in reality?
Wake me up, I'm dreaming of reality.
©2005-2009 ~Vampychicken
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A poem I wrote today.

It's sort of about how I've always kinda lived in my own fantasy world and never really realized I was forgetting reality. Kinda depressing if you think about it, but hey, you can only live in your own world sometimes, you can't forget you have a real life too.

It sounds like a Green Day song to me. Kinda weird. And it rhymes too which freaks me out, because I HATE to rhyme; I normally suck at it. This didn't turn out too bad though. Cool.

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:iconclouddarkheart:
very nice i know just how u feel i am always in my little world :) not quite my type of poetry but very good point.

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In this world is the destiny of man controlled my some prodidential entity or law is it like the hand of god hovering above at least it is true that man has no control...EVEN OVER HIS OWN FATE


~CloudDarkheart
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This is an awesome poem. I can understand where you're coming from. I made a poem about that but i'd rather someone not wake me up. But it had more to do with dreaming and your own world.

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It's like water but with deadly nitrogen.
:iconvampychicken:
lol, Thank you. ^-^

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Poodles beware: I have blasters and I'm looking for you.
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It's not an obsession, I just happen to have hundreds of dollars worth of manga. Ooh, special edition? :drool: M1N3!!!!! :reading:
:iconvampychicken:
lol, Thank you. ^-^ That is true. I'm so used to my own world I keep forgetting that I unfortuantly do live in reality. The reason I need to wake up is because I noticed something. I dunno. Maybe it's because of my serious boyfriend that I started trying to figure out what I should do to live here. lol

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Poodles beware: I have blasters and I'm looking for you.
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It's not an obsession, I just happen to have hundreds of dollars worth of manga. Ooh, special edition? :drool: M1N3!!!!! :reading:

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